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Term Two Assignments

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POW #9:  Legends of the Snow Snake

Assigned:  January 11, 2010

Due:  January 18, 2010

 

Mr. Paterson may not know it, but he needs help!  Last week, he entertained us during the cold weather by telling us about “snow snakes”, the shy and elusive reptiles that only appear during the most bitter winter days. 

 

Very little is known about snow snakes.  They leave mysterious winding trails in fresh snow, and often are glimpsed in the smoke curling out of chimneys.  They often climb trees, where they are camouflaged by hoarfrost-covered branches.  Although snow snakes live near humans, they are seldom seen because they are very shy and hide when people are near.  Snow snakes sometimes live alone, but sometimes they travel in small herds.  No one knows why.

 

Your job this week is to create a short account of a snow snake sighting that will astonish the herpetological world by adding important information to the very little that is known about snow snakes.  Please describe your sighting, and include details of what you learned in a “report” or “journal entry” of no more than one page in length.  Pictures of snow snakes are welcome.  You also have the option of writing snow snake lyrics to a familiar tune which we can sing together at future assemblies.  Keep it short enough to be read over the intercom during future announcements of indoor recesses due to extremely cold weather.  We will combine all of our snow snake tales and songs into a little book and present it to Mr. Paterson, perhaps at a special snow snake assembly.

 

(This will be a tall tale, in case you didn’t realize that!)

 

 

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POW #8:  List Poem

 

Assigned:  Monday, January 4, 2010

Due:  Monday, January 11, 2010

 

Start by thinking of a topic:  a food, a sport, an article of clothing, an activity, an animal.

 

Take a few minutes to write down a list of words and phrases that go with your topic.

 

Example:

 

Places to read a book

 

I wrote down:

 

In the classroom

On the bed

Under a tree

In a chair

On the bus

On the computer

On the piano while practicing

While taking a walk

While talking on the phone

 

 

 

I decided I liked the first three lines, and then decided to make the fourth line rhyme with “bed”.

 

In the classroom

On the bed

Under a tree

In your head.

 

I changed “bus” to “train” because it was easier to rhyme, and then made up the fourth line to rhyme with “train”.

 

In a chair

On the train

On the computer

In the rain

 

 

This time, I decided to break down the last line to make two lines:

 

On the piano while practicing

While taking a walk

On the phone

While you talk

 

Then I added a final stanza to round the whole thing off:

 

There are so many places to read

If you just know where to look

My advice to you is this:

Never be without a book.

 

Is it great poetry?  Not really, but I had fun putting together.

 

Total time elapsed, including writing this article out:  about 20 minutes.

 

Places to Read a Book

By Mrs. Pilon

 

In the classroom

On the bed

Under a tree

In your head.

 

In a chair

On the train

On the computer

In the rain

 

On the piano while practicing

While taking a walk

On the phone

While you talk

 

There are so many places to read

If you just know where to look

My advice to you is this:

Never be without a book.

 

 

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POW #6:  Start a Personal Poetry Collection

(Write two new original poems to add to the two you already have created.)

 

Assigned:  Monday, November 30, 2009

Due:  Monday, November 7, 2009

 

 

       Today, we will begin a poetry unit.  For the next few weeks, expect to read, write and listen to a large number of poems.  Part of your assignment will be to build a collection of poems you enjoy that other writers have created.  You are asked to make illustrated or decorated copies of at least 10 poems, written by others.  Be sure to include titles and authors, and include them in the poetry section of your binder.  This morning, you began by copying the poem below in your best handwriting and then illustrating it.  This will become the cover page of your personal book of poems—something you will continue to build until the end of the year.

 

 

Greatness

by Alden Nowlan

 

I would be the greatest poet the world has ever known

if only I could make  you see

here on the page

sunlight

a sparrow

three kernels of popcorn

spilled on the snow.

 

          This year, you already have written two poems.  The first was a poem that introduced you to the school and community.  (It was posted on a hallway bulletin board in the early weeks of school, and included a photo of you).  The second was POW #4, a poem based on a strong emotion.  You should make copies of these two assignments to include in your poetry booklet.  You may handwrite or word process.          Please make the poems look attractive by choosing your font carefully, and perhaps by including illustrations, a border, and other visual features.  I suggest that you plan to put one poem on each page of the book you create.

 

          This week, you will write the third and fourth poems in your collection. 

 

Part One:  You will model your first new poem on “Greatness” by Alden Nowlan.  Please begin by modelling the same first line:  I would be the greatest poet the world has ever known…) and continue.  You may make the poem longer if you wish, but strive to create a vivid picture with your words.  Think of this poem as a snapshot—a moment in time.  Aim to describe a strong image in just a few simple words.

 

Part Two:  During ELA today, you brainstormed a number of words to describe the landscape and climate of Saskatchewan.  You then read two poems written by First Nations authors describing Haida Gwaii—the Queen Charlotte Islands off the coast of BC.  Both of these poems were full of images of landscapes and weather, and both contained several neologisms—newly-coined words—including rainlight, palelight, wetdeep, ploddy and others.

Think about what you know about images, setting, mood and message.  Then create your own poem describing a Saskatchewan scene, focusing on landscape and climate.  Experiment with creating some neologisms of your own to convey your feelings and images accurately and uniquely.

 

I have included the two poems from Crossroads,  below.

 


Rainlight

By Jenny Nelson

 

Walking in the rainlight,

wet lace and palelight

deep within the circle

               of a

misty late o’night.

 

breath caught with seasmell

hair hung with rainstar

wrap me round with seaweed

or I may float away.

 

gather all my longings

and wrap them up in seafoam

put them in a paper boat

and let them sail away.

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Haida Gwaii

By Jaalen Edenshaw

 

Forest snap, crack, quiet

Beachspray, breakers, cold

Ocean, wetdeep, fishy

Muskeg, ploddy, damp, full

All part of Haida Gwaii.


 

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POW #5.  A Special Place:  Show, don’t tell!

Due:  Monday, November 16, 2009
 

          For your Paragraph of the Week this week, you will be writing a short description of a place that is special to you.  This place may be real (your room; a vacation spot; the hockey rink; Grandma’s kitchen; Disneyland…) or completely imaginary. 

          Try to make your description interesting (vary your sentences, use strong and interesting vocabulary, give specific information, make comparisons, create sensory images using what you see, hear, feel, touch, taste, smell…). 

          On the back of this page is a rubric for descriptive writing. Please use it to help guide your work.  Please put this rubric into your writing binder after you have finished this week’s assignment.

 

          Here is an example, taken from Chapter One of Natalie Babbitt’s wonderful novel, Tuck Everlasting.  (She’s also the author of Kneeknock Rise.)

 

          “The road that led to Treegap had been trod out long before by a herd of cows who were, to say the least, relaxed.  It wandered along in curves and easy angles, swayed off and up in a pleasant tangent to the top of a small hill, ambled down again between fringes of bee-hung clover, and then cut sidewise across a meadow.  Here its edges blurred.  It widened and seemed to pause, suggesting tranquil bovine picnics:  slow chewing and thoughtful contemplation of the infinite.  And then it went on again and came at last to the wood.  But on reaching the shadows of the first trees, it veered sharply, swung out in a wide arc as if, for the first time, it had reason to think where it was going, and passed around…

        “And what is interesting, anyway, about a slim few acres of trees?  There will be a dimness shot through with bars of sunlight, a great many squirrels and birds, a deep, damp mattress of leaves on the ground, and all the other things just as familiar if not as pleasant—things like spiders, thorns and grubs.

        “In the end, however, it was the cows who were responsible for the wood’s isolation, and the cows, through some wisdom they were not wise enough to possess, were very wise indeed.  If they had made their road through the wood instead of around it, then the people would have followed the road.  The people would have noticed the giant ash tree at the center of the wood, and then, in time, they’d have noticed the little spring bubbling up among its roots in spite of the pebbles piled there to conceal it.  And that would have been a disaster so immense that this weary old earth, owned or not to its fiery core, would have trembled on its axis like a beetle on a pin.”

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POW #4:  Writing a Poem About a Strong Emotion

Due:  Monday, November 9

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POW #3:  Writing a Fable

Due:  Monday, November 2


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POW #2:  Writing About a Champion

Assigned:  Monday, October 19, 2009
Due:  Monday, October 26, 2009

What is a champion?  Last week, while studying the story "Joy-Riding", you came up with some responses to this question.

This week, your challenge is to write a paragraph about a person whom you consider to be a champion.  The person may be famous, but he/she can also be someone known only to a few others.

Begin by making a list or web of the reasons you consider this person to be a champion.  (Please be sure to show me this list or web.)

Then write one paragraph explaining why you believe that this person qualifies as a champion.  Include a strong, interesting topic sentence at or near the beginning of your paragraph.  Then support your topic sentence with three or four detailed sentences that provide evidence to support your contention that this person is, indeed, a champion.  Finish with a concluding statement that sums up your thoughts and encourages others to think more deeply about your opinion.

Revise and proofread to strengthen your writing.

Prepare your good copy, double spaced, and either word processed OR written in blue or black ink.  Those who word process may e-mail their finished work to me at pilong@spsd.sk.ca , or hand in their memory stick on Monday morning.

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POW #1:  Writing Dialogue

Assigned:  Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Due:  Monday, October 19, 2009

   For this week’s assignment, you will write a conversation between two objects, creatures or characters that don’t usually speak to each other (example:  foot and shoe; hat and head; snowman and sun; ice and skate; pumpkin and owl; Harry Potter and Edward Cullen).  Please have each object, creature or character say at least five things (total of at least 10 lines of dialogue.)  Be sure to use quotation marks, capitals, end punctuation and paragraph changes correctly.

     Here are a couple of example sentences to help you.

   “How are you today?” asked the supermarket cashier. (Notice that the ? is inside the “.)

     “I am fine,” replied the customer. (Notice the , inside the “ and the new indent.  The period comes at the very end, after the tag.)

   “I was wondering,” said the cashier, “whether you need help carrying your groceries out to the car.” (Notice that the tag breaks up the dialogue—put a comma inside the first closing “, and when you reopen after the tag, use a comma leading in and no capital on the first word of conversation.  Put the final . inside the second set of closing”.)

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Homework Page

   The customer replied, “Not today, thanks!” (Notice the comma that separates the tag from the dialogue, outside of the opening “.  Also notice that the ! is inside the “.)