High School X Sample PMI assignment (paragraphs)
(Imagine that this is the last part of a longer report that similarly
analyzes the PMI points of two other schools' open houses.)
...I attended the High School X Open House on
February 30. When I first entered the foyer, I was amazed by the school
spirit of the student greeters. They even shook hands with my parents
and welcomed them to the school! They handed out really colourful brochures
about the school, and escorted us into the gym for the presentation. The
presentation itself was excellent--very high-tech and it showed a lot about
academic programs as well as sports and clubs. The speeches were short
and interesting. The small-group tours were very well organized and
there were no annoying bells telling us when to move on to the next location.
That's probably because School X doesn't have bells! The two
students who led our group were friendly and well-informed. Best of
all, you could actually hear them, and they were happy to answer all of our
questions. They obviously were very proud of their school.
I knew before the open house that there were lots of good
reasons to go to School X. It's the closest school to my house, and
if he gets his license this summer, my brother will be able to drive me until
he graduates in 2005. The class sizes are quite small--less than 30 students
per class--and there are good technology classes. They even have a small
auto mechanics shop! I was impressed that the computer lab was full
of new equipment. The hallways were wide enough so that big groups
could pass each other without feeling really crowded. Also, School
X has a great wrestling team--they even have some provincial medal winners!
That's a sport I definitely want to get involved in!
There were a few bad points, too. Most of them have
to do with the school's appearance. I was glad to hear that they will
be painting and doing some renovations over the summer. The stairways
are poorly lit, and some of the paint jobs are incredibly bad. I mean,
purple lockers?? School X is a
pretty small school, so there is only one gym and a small cafeteria. There
is also very little space for student parking. The gym equipment looked
really worn out and run-down. My parents were worried because there are only
a few electives in the higher grades. I don't care, though, as long
as there are lots of technology electives, and there are.
There were some interesting things, too. The staff
and students were really friendly, and I knew quite a few people there. My
old hockey coach is one of the gym teachers! Some people worry about
past safety issues, but the new security cameras are supposed to have cut
that problem down. The school puts on a great drama production every
year. Also, there is a very popular Japan exchange. I don't know
for sure that I would be able to raise enough money to go, but it would be
awesome to visit another country!
This was the third open house we attended. I guess
we saved the best for last. My parents and I were all quite excited
about what the school has to offer, and School X will definitely be my first
choice. I can't wait!